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    dots Submission Name: New Paindots
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    Author: C. Starr
    ASL Info:    35/yesplz/State of denial
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 130/196/68
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 667
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    Bytes: 700



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       Written in 2009 ? I think...


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    dotsNew Paindots
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    I need a new pain.
    Something sweet to release me.
    Some kind of other craving.
    That would feel more pleasing.
    New hate.
    It only pollutes my being.
    Need a new love to erase this feeling.
    Need a new look, so you don’t know me.
    Would rather be something you’ve never seen.
    When I glance in the mirror I don’t wanna see what you once wanted.
    My own face, my voice, my laugh, my mind is haunted.
    Need something else to regret instead of ever knowing you.
    Even for the moment just need someone new.
    Anything else to plague me at night.
    Besides ever having you in my sight.




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      A wish by someone not surfieted with danger. :-) Tell more of it after it's fulfilled.
    | Posted on 2014-07-31 00:00:00 | by Snow9 | [ Reply to This ]
      i think when finding said new pain you'll only want it again. the way you put it it's all about the person. some of us are wired like that so w/e. i've been here. i mean personal experience so bad that somehow worse seems better. sucks right?
    | Posted on 2014-07-21 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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