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fallen into your hands im usually afraid of where my words land yet here we are life never stopped,while it dug into my heart string along your fears of past interfere, so servere, so clear ive faced all my fears open to a new life aint who i was open to love, askin his soul.. are you open to love? whyyyyy would you let yourself bleed he asks me what girls essentially need you breathe, succeed, dont know cant read what hes wrote, dry throat where i find no cure my hearts like damn, be my god of nurture.

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Im usually afraid of where my Words land Good line. I sometimes say things without thinking and they usually get me in trouble A) with the girlfriend B) when im completely hammered at the bar Lol good job.

| Posted on 2014-07-25 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]

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