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    dots Submission Name: Puzzle Pieces dots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Spoof/Venting
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       married life was great or so i thought.he had an affair. in a constant state of confusion these days.

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    dotsPuzzle Pieces dots

    Tears no longer stain these cheeks of mine
    At one point my cheeks could have been conceived as a river bed
    Holding tons of rushing, raging water.
    Tears no longer well up in my eyes when the thought of you crosses my mind
    No longer do I need to express the pain you caused me through an endless stream of tears

    However, this is not to suggest that the pain does not remain deep within my permanently disfigured heart
    Forever my heart will remain “under construction” after the way you handled it
    After the way you misused my love, my trust, my loyalty!!
    And just maybe one day I won’t feel the pain
    Maybe one day it won’t be too late,
    Someone else will take away all the heartache you have given me

    Until that day,
    Until that time in my life
    I shall walk this earth with a heart littered with fractures,
    That will soon creep into drawn out cracks,
    Which will then be overwhelmed by the gravity and will shatter!!

    My heart soon laid out like a jigsaw puzzle
    Only pain staking effort will ever put it back together…

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