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    dots Submission Name: Gravitydots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 907
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    Bytes: 564



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       this is just a write that doesn't mean anything. my relationships are perfectly fine but I thought it was a decent piece. its unlike anything ive ever written before. anyways enjoy.


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    dotsGravitydots
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    Set me free.
    Leave me be.
    My thoughts are polluted of our longevity.
    I can't see.
    What's in front of me.
    Because I'm constantly floating toward her memory.
    Like Gravity.

    My insanity.
    Nonstop profanity.
    It drives me crazy to think that you're not here with me.
    Publicly.
    And embracingly.
    I fall apart and fall into total depravity.
    It floats to me.
    Through a gentle breeze.
    Like she lovingly, pulled me in.
    Just like gravity.




    Submitted on 2014-07-22 23:31:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Emotional turmoil pulling the life like gravity. Good write. Kudos. Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2014-08-11 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      Awe although this write didn't mean anything about your personal relationships, its still sweet and heartfelt :) great write Kase. Keep it up!
    ~Tay
    | Posted on 2014-07-23 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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