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    Author: pixie_007
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 45/77/63
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       sometimes wen we are in pain words just come out. on no specific order and with no specific meaning. but i get it,its all my pain.


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    dotsBinary codedots
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    0's and 1's roll vertically from top to bottom from my screen
    falling like blue video game digits,posing as programs

    just like your words roll in one ear and out the other
    slithering through like snakes,posing as sincerity

    i wonder if you ever hear yourself talking
    if you ever understand the gibberish you speak

    you tell me that you aren't perfect yet all u do is sneer at my mistakes
    you always say you do not judge yet you pull up your nose with my actions

    has anyone ever told you the true meaning of a poser?
    has anyone ever explained to you the meaning of pretentious?

    they say pictures hold a thousand words
    so i will show you the face of a pretentious poser

    he is that man you see looking back at you in the mirror




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