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    dots Submission Name: Fuck What You Say (Ft. Cordell)dots
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    Author: LadyVoice
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 2/2/2
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
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    dotsFuck What You Say (Ft. Cordell)dots
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    Cordell: Everyone's always mouthing off, saying what they shouldn't say, more like a cough, lets move on to another day, everyone jump around, fuck what you say, jump till we cave in the ground, shut up and party all day,"HEY!"

    L.V: Party all day, party all day, hey, fuck what you have to say, hide behind a keyboard wont say it to my face, but i am lady like, move on to the next mic, you're just karaoke bitch I'm filling concerts "HEY"...

    Cordell: Swallow your pride, we know you're hollow, let the BS go by, don't make this party mellow, put your hands in the air, wave them like, shits not fair, wave them like we don't care, wave them to let them know we're there!

    L.V: I swallowed my pride and told you if I had to say it twice i would be coming after you full force, dwarf, your Lil Wayne poetry, tort; a wrongful act or an infringement of a right; leading to civil legal liability. Hey!

    L.V




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