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    dots Submission Name: The Nigeria withindots

    Author: kingsley
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 100/59/46
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsThe Nigeria withindots

    The Nigeria Within

    There is a country within every Nigerian
    A country not restricted by geography, currency,
    language or religion.
    A country who knows not the taste of colonialism
    And has no civil war weighing on its conscience.

    There is a nation within every Nigerian
    A nation so great that it can achieve anything
    A nation of peace, unity and progress,
    A nation that inspired our founding fathers.

    There is a Nigeria within every Nigerian
    A Nigeria we must always reveal
    Every time the Nigeria we live in makes a wrong turn
    For in the absence of such unwavering loyalty
    The Nigeria we call home
    Will end up very far from greatness.

    Submitted on 2014-07-31 07:29:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thanks Monad, I need all the luck I can get right now on this venture
    | Posted on 2014-08-04 00:00:00 | by kingsley | [ Reply to This ]
      I've read all three of your recent submissions, these are noble intentions. Good luck!!
    | Posted on 2014-07-31 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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