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    Author: trinityfinger
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    your diadumenos, a genuflection in still waters, bearing light
    over distance, and through the murky shadows of habitual

    sleep.

    this is confinement when one forgets the notion of tomorrow,
    detritus and the polished stain of wood, choral yet fractious.

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