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Author: trinityfinger
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engrave




your diadumenos, a genuflection in still waters, bearing light
over distance, and through the murky shadows of habitual

sleep.

this is confinement when one forgets the notion of tomorrow,
detritus and the polished stain of wood, choral yet fractious.

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