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Author: trinityfinger
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Absence falters, squeezes
on a warm, autumnal evening.

You describe potential as a concrete flower
in this city. I disagree, and search
for a hybrid mercy

Lost in words and notes
and a sense of previous anger
welling up from years of cold repression,
a finality to all of this:

Sunrise is for the tainted yet holy.
Grace and desire are fickle partners
where I am worlds apart
from either kind.

Speak of brilliance found only in an opal,
all five senses attuned within a galaxy
of broken bones, the old-woman smile
I find in dusty novels that I read
when all else comes

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  The towards the opening especially- my words! The cold repression and the welling; the absence that squeezes your heart. Grace and discontent seems equality inadequate now, but won't give up on desire. It's your desire that you find speaking everywhere now, in novels, in music, and (in my case) in your writing.
| Posted on 2014-08-07 00:00:00 | by Snow9 | [ Reply to This ]

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