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A Nexus

Author: Ramneet
ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
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A Nexus

A Nexus
Relationships are the companions for the journey called Life.
The destination of this journey is the abode of Divine, our Creator and our Savior.
Pain triggers the longing to fill this void.
Relationship with Him is inherent, transcendent and intimate like water and tide.
He takes care of us although we rely on others.
He is beyond our comprehension as He is not tangible.
Physical form not visible as He is formless.
Communication with Him takes place through thoughts and contemplation.
He speaks and guides through our thoughts.
He is in our thoughts and in our consciousness.

Submitted on 2014-08-06 23:24:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I dont know how to comment on this. I mean, i always thought it funny that something so mysterious could never apply itself physically yet the hope we all have for it to be real remains. Thx for the insight
| Posted on 2014-08-13 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]

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