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    dots Submission Name: Fighterdots
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    Author: juss_kriss
    ASL Info:    23/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 404/445/126
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Sorry
    Total Views: 1000
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1719



    Description:
       RIP old man. I wish you were still here.


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    dotsFighterdots
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    v1.
    there's really nothing to say
    no words of comfort
    nothing to take away the pain
    your light's gonna fade a little
    with each passing day
    but that twinkle in your eye
    is what keeps your world alive
    what can i say

    ch.
    don't give up on me now
    cause you've always been a fighter
    wipe that look of defeat off your face
    the battle has only begun
    your arsenal might be a little lighter
    but i know you'll only go down swinging
    just like you've always done
    you'll never leave without a fight
    you're a fighter

    v2.
    stormy clouds are rolling in
    the sun's gone to hide
    even the crash of thunder
    is not what it used to be
    there's no turning back
    you've always been ready
    to live the life you've been given
    face on, head strong

    bridge.
    fight, fight
    put up your fists
    fight, fight
    you're not the type to back down
    fight, fight
    i'm counting on you
    fight, fight
    you'll only go down swinging
    fight, fight
    you've always been a fighter
    so fight, fight
    don't give up on life just yet

    coda.
    i've no words of comfort
    nothing to take away the pain
    the battle has only begun
    so wipe that look of defeat off your face
    you'll live to fight another day
    you'll only go down swinging
    live to fight another day
    you'll only go down swinging
    you're a fighter




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