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    dots Submission Name: Truthdots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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    Here's what I know!
    You’re a manipulative person
    Self-centered - self-serving person
    You crave to be the center of attention and when you are there all is well
    When you are not - watch the fuck out!
    You know how to choose your words in a manner in which gets people believing as you want them to believe
    You have a mischievous quality about yourself
    Secretly you think you’re better than everyone else…
    But I can see your deceit
    Your lies
    Your betrayals
    I see all that you pretend isn't there…

    Submitted on 2014-08-08 00:21:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Truth is such a thing that stands out. It is eternal. There is beauty in the truth if the truth is sweet and the person who is truthful is always sweet.
    | Posted on 2014-08-08 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]

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