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    dots Submission Name: Nightmare Mandots
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    Author: blankscreen
    ASL Info:    22/f/NY
    Elite Ratio:    5.57 - 222/196/163
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsNightmare Mandots
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    I found myself waiting as he wove his hands around my body
    Like it was an extension of himself
    Reaching for parts I rarely visit
    I turned away and counted down the minutes until sunrise
    Wondering how much dignity this evening would cost

    I thumbed through the days it would take to recover
    Reaching in to the dark parts of my mind
    I wondered if he had mistaken my kindness for empathy
    Or my silence for acquiescence

    As he grabbed by wrist
    Like a piece of candy
    And dragged it to the pieces of himself that he itched to share
    I snapped it back like a laffy taffy
    And laughed at how easy it was
    For him to own me

    I lost myself in the distance to morning
    Wavering between insanity and numbness
    I ate his excuses with morbid tiptoes
    Sustenance for a forgiving heart
    But the moment he left
    His excuses mounted in to a chokehold of flashbacks

    Moments etched so deep
    That they hurt in my sleep
    I felt his hands upon my back
    And his menacing grin staring in to my chest
    I am still running for the sunrise.

    Hopefully I will catch up soon.




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