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    dots Submission Name: Witching Hourdots
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    Author: Passionbyapathy
    ASL Info:    23/M/Columbus, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 207/277/230
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWitching Hourdots
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    back from neverland
    im flush with dust
    floating there
    falling up
    side down

    Tink, you southern bell
    flying high to the sun
    you'll burn your beautiful wings
    be careful

    The Hook is a foul thing
    gritty and pompous
    Tic toc goes the crocodile clock
    the crocodile clock

    The Captain
    he knew
    he told his whole crew
    Tic toc goes the crocodile clock
    the crocodile clock

    Jaws shred stern
    crushing wood
    between two broken bones
    Tic toc goes the crocodile clock
    the crocodile clock

    Free to exist
    I manifest wings
    and soar
    fresh wind on a new face
    blowing soul into pixie powder
    fulfilling a dreamlike passion
    to fall in love with the skies

    This blue moon is beautiful
    in a quiet sort of way
    its a wonder
    that this witching hour
    warranted these words




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