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    dots Submission Name: Taking Her Body For A Test-Drivedots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTaking Her Body For A Test-Drivedots
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    Her body is naked and sweaty.
    I explore her torso as things get hot and heavy.
    She tells me that she's ready.
    So i pursue to make her heartbeat unsteady.

    She bites her lips and shuts her eyes.
    Her body language doesn't lie.
    Aggressively i split her thighs.
    And take her away to paradise.




    Submitted on 2014-08-13 18:10:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Still can't get over it lmao
    | Posted on 2014-08-16 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      Love the use of my quote lol
    | Posted on 2014-08-15 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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