Cry for Help

Author: Crestfallenman ASL Info:    24/M/CA Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 622 /962 /454 Words: 77

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Cry for Help

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I'm maimed by my sorrow, I have come to this point... This inner silence, my shame, Visualizing you to be here... When you were never here... Nothing I do will change the outcome, Devoid my silence, pass my bleeding heart. Take pride, While I close out, shut down, and die inside... When I'm dying without anyone knowing... When I'm crying without any reason... I'm empty, I'm lost I need to find help

Submitted on 2014-08-19 18:15:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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i gotta say, my heart hurts when i read your writes. it truly does. i want to give words of encouragement but i don't know if they would change how you feel. just know i will keep you in my good thoughts and hope that they find their way to you. stay tuff over there. stay tuff.

| Posted on 2014-10-22 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]

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