Addendum to Runes journal of 6/28/2014
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My advice: go listen to the youtube clip (Runes journal)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=5mdl6bcwG18
https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=5mdl6bcwG18
Addendum to Runes journal of 6/28/2014
addendum to Runes journal of 6/28/2014 Said the sea to the shore “you don’t love me anymore All the good times seem like long forgotten chores While sunshine sucks my waters making rain I’ll visit other shores where I have lain Make trees and grass and flowers grow again Make harmony with clouds the skys I lend Yet your sandy walk I will forever tend Though you forget it’s time itself I bend†Said the shore to the sea “you truly take me wrong We will touch throughout eternity in song Though moonlight is the mate for which I long We’ll touch your tides like members of your tong Make swirling currents beautiful and strong For time is but the mask where we belong†Said the sea to the shore “take comfort in my lust For I turn even iron and steel to rust Like the oceans of night’s sky I will remain To touch your soul with yet a new refrain That we may yet be lovers once again†I hope you're not gone for two years and more again. I miss you already. |
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Thanks Bruce for the comments on my work---I just throw writes up here and there,~~~~~~testing--see who listens.--who cares and I appreciate any notice from some of our "Old Guard" here at Elite--Time marches on--so they say (Wish I could march!! lol)--anyway jez saying Thanks!! | | Posted on 2014-10-17 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ] | Hi Bruce me again in response to your response to my comment on your post. :) You made a passing reference to | the oceans of night's sky in the last verse but I took the poem itself to be about the sea and shore, not about the ocean's of night's sky. Sorry if I misunderstood what you were saying. Which are the oceans of night's sky, and which are the shores do you think? :) ~C | Posted on 2014-09-19 00:00:00 | by ponykeeper | [ Reply to This ] | Hi Bruce | I guess I don't need to know what this is referring to to enjoy it. Yes lust seems to be the mot du jour. It's kind of an honest word I think. Interesting concept, the shore and the ocean as lovers--one a little reluctant by the sounds of it. But I wonder how the ocean bends time? cheers, Chris | Posted on 2014-09-19 00:00:00 | by ponykeeper | [ Reply to This ] | "your"? | Deja vu! I just went from Ponykeeper who just moved "lust" into where "ice" used to be. I did mention that I would never criticize lust. I like these major entities conversing. It seems as though they must have been doing so for a very long time indeed. This has a Carroll sort of ring to it, Walrus and Carpenter sort of thing. And then there's the common element at work. "Though moonlight is the mate for which I long" - fav sucks my waters other shores where I have lain it’s time itself I bend Quite sexy stuff for geographic features. ;) Lloyd | Posted on 2014-09-18 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ] | |
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