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    dots Submission Name: ©™ Disapeardots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    my heart begins to sink in my chest
    i know this feeling all to well

    my gut is screaming , a soul in pain
    have we drifted so far away

    Do we not know who we are
    once so vibrant set a blaze

    Has turned cold
    solid as stone

    Does it still beat
    Or have i just lost my way

    I cant speak
    cant I, find the words to express

    all the sorrow , I miss you
    As if , saying where have you been

    I'm growing cold , I'm feeling alone
    losing myself as i'm falling down

    where are you , to help me now
    Off in the distance , are you still here

    You've lost interest & I'm lost in fear
    will you ever love me, or am i better

    left To disappear




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