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    dots Submission Name: Ladder to the Starsdots
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    Author: lynn7
    ASL Info:    43/ St. Augustine, FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 419/288/103
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 873
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    Description:
       I haven't posted anything in a long time. So this is a practice run and a work in progress. I have a lot more, but I've lost my confidence in my writing.


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    dotsLadder to the Starsdots
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    Here I stand
    Once again, knocking at the door
    Like so many times before
    Searching to find who I am
    Broken, but full of Grace
    I wait for the Lord to open

    Impatiently I’ve been
    And unprepared I am
    For the task at hand
    This is the end my friend
    For this moment we’ve waited

    These days, we’ve dreamed!




    Submitted on 2014-08-21 13:38:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      it good keep written cos I would love to read more of your poem.
    I love the title .
    | Posted on 2014-09-16 00:00:00 | by vinestar | [ Reply to This ]
      This is an excellent topic. You must expand your write.This intriguing question also haunts me and keep me wandering. I liked your write and will wait for it's sequel.
    | Posted on 2014-09-07 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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