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    Author: closetpoet
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    Words: 106
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    I was finally free
    Free of that devilish, devious, dervish
    It was a question, of how it could be over,
    to everyone but me
    How does one drown,
    and not realize they're getting wet?

    I was so confused,
    this wasn't anything I planned
    And I, having so little experience in such matters,
    I tried to collect my things; my life
    How does one pack a pound of guilt,
    into a half pound soul?

    Who really cares whose fault it is, or was
    Apparently, everyone
    And everyone did what they can
    to ignore the present
    and lament the past
    How could they not?





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      One should get free of the malevolence in life. It is a good write on a good topic.
    | Posted on 2014-09-01 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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