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    dots Submission Name: Trieddots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTrieddots
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    I think I'll try again
    It won't be like before,
    but then. how could it?
    It's all different
    I'm different,
    and yet I still escape to moments
    that feel familiar and worn
    and I wonder
    Am I just forgetting something?

    I never revelled in a sunset
    with someone before
    Never felt the reciprocal peck
    of a playful kiss;
    always longing for truth,
    disguised as something easy
    Am I leaving something out this time?

    What if I am?
    Is the trial, the experience,
    the pursuit
    not worth the cost
    of the ticket
    that brought me here?
    Which is where, exactly?




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