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    dots Submission Name: Pessimistic dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/623/381
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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    dotsPessimistic dots
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    Please elaborate!
    Explain yourself!

    Making a factual statement such as telling me I am for the most part a "pessimistic" person
    Why yes, yes I am.

    With you knowing me "oh so well" or so your suggesting
    with that condescending tone of voice
    Let's explore the reasons for my natural pessimistic point of view
    Could it be the sexual abuse I experienced from my loving step father?
    Or my attempt to bury those memories with all the heroin I could ever get my hands on
    No no its most certainly that choice I finally came to
    Laying the 12 gauge rifle on my lap
    Reliving all the horrors that filled my 21 years of life
    Now living with the scars as you know

    I can only ever live a life that was given to me with the family that was given to me
    Not everyone has two loving parents
    Not everyone has a close-kit family.

    I am who I am because of these experiences
    But they do not control me
    They do not hinder my ability to be rational
    To think clearly.




    Submitted on 2014-09-01 16:36:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Personally I find this a fairly optimistic point of view. I find my tribulations try hard to taint my ability to be rational. Hoo rah critter!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2014-09-01 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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