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    dots Submission Name: Timorous and Tremblingdots
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    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    28/M/A butterfly's dream
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 254/389/301
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsTimorous and Tremblingdots
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    My song -
    timorous and trembling -
    before the Lord.

    Can a man of darkness
    put off his cloak
    and let the light shine forth?

    Yes.

    Will I?

    I am not sure.

    My life -
    timorous and trembling -
    hangs in the balance.




    Submitted on 2014-09-02 11:28:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the message here. It's quite a sobering thought, isn't it? Wondering if your life meant something. Wanting to be good but there's always a darkness inside. Lovely.

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    | Posted on 2014-10-23 00:00:00 | by irrelevantme | [ Reply to This ]


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