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October in August


Author: AsiaticFox
ASL Info:    28/M/A butterfly's dream
Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 254 /389 /301
Words: 78
Class/Type: Poetry /Nature
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October in August


All agaze

       in the rainy haze

Summer's a myth -

       October in August -

              blustery gift

Wrapped in a blanket

       books are the warmth

              for my soul




Submitted on 2014-09-02 11:33:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Sounds like me these days. Where I currently reside, storms are a day-to-day occurrence. Though, it also happened to occur to me that a pit/cave seemed necessary, so I've got this covert above my closet, stashed with all my books and a thick comforter that I roll up in. A couple candles, a cup of tea and even in June it feels like November.
| Posted on 2015-06-05 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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