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    dots Submission Name: October in Augustdots
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    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    28/M/A butterfly's dream
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 254/389/301
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsOctober in Augustdots
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    All agaze
    in the rainy haze
    Summer's a myth -
    October in August -
    blustery gift
    Wrapped in a blanket
    books are the warmth
    for my soul




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      Sounds like me these days. Where I currently reside, storms are a day-to-day occurrence. Though, it also happened to occur to me that a pit/cave seemed necessary, so I've got this covert above my closet, stashed with all my books and a thick comforter that I roll up in. A couple candles, a cup of tea and even in June it feels like November.
    | Posted on 2015-06-05 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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