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    dots Submission Name: go gentle into (a) good nightdots
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    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    28/M/A butterfly's dream
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 254/389/301
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsgo gentle into (a) good nightdots
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    Please, the sound of rain in the night.
    Please, the pillow and the futon embracing me,
    cool cotton against the skin.
    Please, the calm draped around my mind,
    and the eyes that are dry,
    Please, I beg of you, let me go gentle
    into a good night of sleep!




    Submitted on 2014-09-02 11:37:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      a little play on words of "do not go gentle into that good night?" you do want to go gentle into that good night :p haha.
    | Posted on 2014-09-06 00:00:00 | by lolaxelmo | [ Reply to This ]
      lol, well this is just great for what you did there. i guess we all get to longing for a good nights sleep sometime.
    | Posted on 2014-09-05 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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