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    dots Submission Name: Contradicted Me || part 21dots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 303/230/267
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsContradicted Me || part 21dots
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    My first words
    were a number of 7;
    dividing all sentences into a single phrase
    that described your very presence

    "Your eyes send me to another world"
    I say truthfully

    what without words cannot be said
    I express to you with every stare
    every touch and every breath;
    who was I before? I am unaware

    stolen air and stolen cells
    as though twisted veins within us cross
    aging beneath waters, creating moss
    drowning ourselves, holding still
    much like the sea and the skies,

    our bodies the space engulfs

    shaping into forms we never knew
    layers upon layers, creating shades of want;

    doesn’t matter how much
    I’ll take whatever you got.




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    ||| Comments |||
      I've forgotten how to write, unfortunately, so I have nothing constructive to say...
    I am, however, still capable of most emotional interaction and I can confirm that this whole piece sent me to another world, tbh :)
    Forgot how your words had that sort of power. Love the nature imagery. Takes me to a place in the back of my mind that is dark and tranquil.
    I ramble, hahaha.
    <3
    | Posted on 2014-09-05 00:00:00 | by EshyFishy | [ Reply to This ]


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