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    Author: SetmyselfonFire
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 41/55/47
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Anxiously digesting patience
    But my heart is made of worry and it dreams of knowing everything
    relationships require matinence
    but tell me what the fuck is perfection?
    it doesn't exist.women and men they persist
    the world encourages us to not resist
    this poem is made with bordom
    So are my worries fears piontlessly crazy tears
    But he loves me anyway




    Submitted on 2014-09-03 19:07:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Perfection is something one can only discuss realistically in terms of incorporeity's ideologies and not really quite applicable to the corporeally preternatural state we live in.

    Bruce

    PS: However a good solid case of perfection orientation can definitely keep one on their toes. Ah yes, the spontaneities of cogent fecundity.
    | Posted on 2014-09-03 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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