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    dots Submission Name: Number Onedots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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    dotsNumber Onedots
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    I wanted to be your number one
    yet some how I always left feeling second best
    I wanted to be your girl,
    The one whom holds and protects your heart
    I wanted others to look at us and want a man
    Just Like Mine...

    But the moon and stars were not aligned in our favor
    Fate has something else in mind

    No matter what though...
    I hope you find your "Number One" girl.




    Submitted on 2014-09-05 10:37:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is a truely felt and good message. good for you. i guess it can usually be bolied down to number one in someones eyes.
    | Posted on 2014-09-06 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a truely felt and good message. good for you. i guess it can usually be bolied down to number one in someones eyes.
    | Posted on 2014-09-06 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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