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    dots Submission Name: Tameddots
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    Author: lolaxelmo
    ASL Info:    23/F/IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 34/37/38
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1239
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    dotsTameddots
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    cedar and succulents
    I like the out-of-doors
    tamed feebly amongst
    natural disorder—
    foolish feelings go by
    way of words written in
    print, on screen illuminating
    eyes, the point too discreetly
    read between small (significance)
    in jests, j’s and gestures. the
    calm demeanor reflects
    my own, complimenting the
    energy holding to focus
    on cool days evocative
    of warmth while ongoing minute
    signals received by the signifier,
    not unnoticed but matched




    Submitted on 2014-09-06 19:40:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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