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    dots Submission Name: Paying the price.dots

    Author: Narna
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 14/102/68
    Words: 190
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    dotsPaying the price.dots

    write you on to the underside of my coaster,
    Frustration printed instead of ripped in to little pieces.
    Words staggered like my
    thoughts of
    are my idea of advertisement.
    You sell yourself, but I could write you
    Into the subconscious of anyone
    Willing to read. (Or not)
    I am not the only one who buys this.

    Submitted on 2014-09-07 17:18:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thought provoking. Interesting idea, writing on the bottom of a coaster. Wish I was currently somewhere a coaster could sit under a cold draft.

    I like the reference to advertising using subliminal messages, which we all know about and think we ignore. Whether you read it or not... sucked in like a transdermal patch. There's something magic and perhaps a little evil in that.
    | Posted on 2014-09-11 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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