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    dots Submission Name: Balin Ethan Daniel Robbinsdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsBalin Ethan Daniel Robbinsdots
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    To my dear beloved friend.
    Your life came to such a sudden end.
    The things Ive heard, they cant be true.
    I just spent the day with you!
    Yet I know it is, deep down inside.
    And now I realize they aren't lies.
    This isn't some cruel prank you've played.
    You're no longer here, you've gone so far away.
    You left your memories with me, they're engraved on the stone I call my heart.
    We all miss you, you know.
    You left us way too soon.
    All I can think of now, are the last words I said to you.

    "Balin! I love you and I'll see you soon!"

    Now all I can say is

    "Come back! I miss you!"

    Forever&Always in my heart B-man!




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    ||| Comments |||
      Just went through this is feb, i known its hard. Great job letting it out
    | Posted on 2014-09-25 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
      A sad lose of someone no body really knew.
    | Posted on 2014-09-12 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      He will be missed but remembered forever.
    | Posted on 2014-09-09 00:00:00 | by ForgottenGraves | [ Reply to This ]


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