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    dots Submission Name: Do You See Itdots
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    Author: Windigo
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 6/13/13
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsDo You See Itdots
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    Do you see it?

    The colors, the colors of the heart.
    Not red, simply a sound, a beauty.

    Let it be, let it be unlocked and opened
    The yellow light shines through, warmed by hot stone.

    Close, close where your favorites of favorite live.
    In a flash memories crash on Forgotten Time Shore

    Washed away with age, we loose the wrinkles, babies laugh and we are children again.

    Love is golden, it turns the key letting the tide flow
    Into the world we know.




    Submitted on 2014-09-09 21:11:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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