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    dots Submission Name: White Drops of Blackdots
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    Author: Windigo
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 6/13/13
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsWhite Drops of Blackdots
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    White, like all things in the beginning.

    Time, time takes and steals, in whispers and begs with cold breath.

    We bleed, eyes wide open, we drink.
    Consumed by our own demise, we die.


    Black, Black like all things in the end.
    Turned into sand, washed in stardust,
    something beautiful even then.




    Submitted on 2014-09-09 21:20:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can interpret this a few ways. The first time I read it, it made me think of rebirth. Growing old, decaying and falling apart only to come back as something different. Second time made think of vampires. Living as a human enjoying simplicity then transforming into a dark and deadly being. Lastly I feel it could be life itself as all things white, pure, living etc... then death comes and takes it all away. Sorry if I missed the point just how I read it in my mind enjoyed reading this. I love the contrast of black and white, they can represent so many feelings.
    Looking forward to reading more.
    | Posted on 2014-09-15 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]


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