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    dots Submission Name: A Hand to Holddots
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    Author: Windigo
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 6/13/13
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsA Hand to Holddots
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    It's getting quite now,
    I think the thunders gone,
    Come on baby don't be afraid.

    It will be ok I know we'll find a way,
    Through the stars and sea

    By the way you look so damn beautiful,
    Take my hand, walk across this land.

    I demand your love forevermore

    It's getting lighter now,
    I think the night has gone,
    Come on baby don't be afraid.

    It will be ok, I know we'll find a way,
    Past this haze of gray.

    Come on baby don't be afraid,
    We need a fighter now,
    Come on baby take my hand.




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