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    dots Submission Name: Razors, punches, and " 'night honey buncdots
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    Author: TheAirWeBreathe
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 5/16/19
    Words: 206
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsRazors, punches, and " 'night honey buncdots
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    Go ahead, with your words like razor blades on my skin those many years ago
    Tell me with that voice like a creaking door
    How much you hate me
    Do you think it matters anymore?
    I dont know why I bothered.
    Dont you get it, I moved past this so long ago.
    Black and blue the colors of your fathers mustang as you roll down the street, and I recall those being the colors of my skin all those many years ago
    Tell me, with that harsh voice
    How much you hurt me
    Did you really think I cared?
    Fuck you, fuck your home, and fuck what someone must've done to you
    Because I just dont care anymore.
    I dont know what I did to deserve
    I was always in love with
    Did you ever turn out the light
    When you left?
    I doubt you even remember my face
    I wouldnt blame you 'cause I almost forgot your name
    We used to be so close, but now I realize you were the pain in the hide.
    As if i'd let you back inside.





    Submitted on 2014-09-11 01:29:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yep, some doors need to remain closed. Pity such happens in the first place but it sure doesn't need a second chance. Pity also the fool who would harm anyone I care about. Category: Rant
    | Posted on 2014-09-11 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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