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    dots Submission Name: I Wish Youdots

    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    57 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846/1390/288
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI Wish Youdots

    I wish you hope and fortitude
    With peace of mind abound
    To live your life lost in a love
    I wish you fertile ground

    I wish you health and happiness
    To the full and not in part
    To help you find your way in life
    I wish this from my heart

    I wish you strength to see things through
    When your life gets fraught with pain
    If your days become a thunderstorm
    I wish you gentle rain

    I wish you happy memories
    To cherish once they’re made
    For you to reminisce sometimes
    I wish they never fade

    I wish you everlasting love
    To keep you company
    And whoever lives deep in your heart
    I wish one day you’ll see

    I wish you all that’s in your dreams
    As you fly upon the wing
    But most of all my sweetest love
    I wish you everything

    Submitted on 2014-09-11 15:50:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is very positive and light at first, but why do I feel that this is also a good bye?
    | Posted on 2014-10-21 00:00:00 | by tashtalk | [ Reply to This ]
      Thank you and may you too behold your tribute.
    | Posted on 2014-09-12 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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