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    Author: vinestar
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 3/5/2
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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    Who can I trust ?
    who can I call a friend ?
    who can I call family ?
    who can I reach out and be save ?

    Life the unending film
    has thrown unbearable challenges on me
    that has over burdened my young heart
    it took all those that loved me
    left to learn the tricks of life alone
    left to know which is good and bad
    my eyes have shed tears that could make a pool of water

    No one is there for me
    no not even the fear wind ghosts.




    Submitted on 2014-09-16 10:42:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Stay away the deep end of that pool.
    | Posted on 2014-09-17 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      God!! We're all broken and need healing. Call on Him and he will open the door.

    Love of Christ,

    Blue
    | Posted on 2014-09-16 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]


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