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    dots Submission Name: Colette with a C you againdots
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    Author: Narna
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 14/102/68
    Words: 131
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    dotsColette with a C you againdots
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    She was prone to bouts of existentialism.
    Periods brought about in company.
    It would lead her to wander,
    and wonder why
    I never found it easy to trust.
    Her
    fear of getting closer to,
    just stepping near the thought of
    two,
    would keep her feet from sitting still.
    I'm still holding on. But the
    timing is impeccable.
    The distance does not make it simple.
    Since going on to live separate lives,
    the times have changed.
    Our day in day out existence seems strange.
    Nothing's the same and neither am I.
    Yet,
    I want to ask if we're still locked in for
    that dance in a year? Or
    have you flocked off on that idea too.
    I want to ask if I should give up on you?




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      I was only looking for some entertaining words of another soul - something expected, if not unexpected or baffling.
    I often find myself reading things I can't quite comprehend with full understanding - only enough to interpret from a third person POV.

    Today, I found myself relating to a piece with unspeakable empathy - a kind I can't remember ever knowing.
    If I have, it was long ago.

    I'm not sure if you've read anything of mine (specifically anything with the letter M?), but I'd like to point out that this is basically the story of my - first love - life...
    Hope that isn't too creepy for you - rather, I'd hope it's amusing.

    Fave - of course.
    | Posted on 2014-10-08 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      "Since going on to live separate lives,
    the times have changed.
    Our day in day out existence seems strange.
    Nothing's the same and neither am I.
    Yet,
    I want to ask if we're still locked in for
    that dance in a year? Or
    have you flocked off on that idea too.
    I want to ask if I should give up on you?"


    my hopes, as faint as a dying star
    embrace the shadows near where you are
    and if this cruel ennui seems bleak
    there's always the chance our souls will speak...

    Just some thoughts on yours.
    | Posted on 2014-10-01 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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