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    dots Submission Name: I lost you dots
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    Author: Apoetwcloudenvy
    Elite Ratio:    1.44 - 6/9/10
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsI lost you dots
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    Yes its finally Fall!
    Trees are beginning to turn
    The wind is becoming cooler
    Yet it is the saddest season for me
    Because this marks the start of losing you

    Because at the end of autumn
    I lost the only person who understood me
    I lost the only person who know the pain behind my smile
    I lost the only person who genuinely cared about me
    I lost the only person who prompted me to achieve my inner vision
    I lost the only person who was not only my rock but the of love of my life
    Yea, The loss of your scorn this beautiful autumn weather
    Because with every fallen leaf that day grows ever so closer
    Of when I lost you




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      Wow those words were full of shit.
    | Posted on 2014-10-21 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, those woods were really thick.
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