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    dots Submission Name: We Smile as We Sufferdots
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    Author: Esophagus1
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 231/279/149
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWe Smile as We Sufferdots
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    Twisted and unusual the skein;
    Guided by fear and blind outside
    all feelings except those which
    can claw their way through the
    numb indecision of collectively
    nothing.

    The chains bound us
    to eternity a moment.
    The truth sacrificed
    to our convenience.
    We suffer as we suffer.
    We smile as we play.

    Festering wounds become us
    objectively denying all chances
    of humanity only to refute our
    self imminence; The end only
    having the power to begin us
    anew.




    Submitted on 2014-10-07 21:49:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the prose is quite carefully pieced together, drawing in the reader and begging them to think about the words. well done
    | Posted on 2014-10-09 00:00:00 | by gwenn sundala | [ Reply to This ]


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