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musings of an autumn day


Author: gwenn sundala
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written 9/3/04


musings of an autumn day



i feel the wind in my face. i hear the waves crashing against the shore. i hear the birds in the air. i smell the salt of the sea, the seaweed washed ashore smells...interesting...




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  This piece echoes my love for the ocean.
| Posted on 2017-03-28 00:00:00 | by WriteSomething | [ Reply to This ]


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