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    dots Submission Name: musings of an autumn daydots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 76/70/51
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Being a Teen
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       written 9/3/04


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    dotsmusings of an autumn daydots
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    i feel the wind in my face. i hear the waves crashing against the shore. i hear the birds in the air. i smell the salt of the sea, the seaweed washed ashore smells...interesting...




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      This piece echoes my love for the ocean.
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