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    dots Submission Name: Forever&Alwaysdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210/104/71
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsForever&Alwaysdots
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    Forever&Always
    Is what we say
    And to you
    I'm giving my heart away.
    Its as fragile as glass
    Yes,
    Im sorry
    It has cracks.
    But its yours now
    Do with it what you will.
    My only fear?
    You wont understand how I feel.
    So long as your honest
    And you continue to love me
    I won't leave
    So I give to you
    Myself entirely...




    Submitted on 2014-10-12 14:58:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      simple and relatable poem, i must say. :)
    | Posted on 2014-12-12 00:00:00 | by D-Ink | [ Reply to This ]
      
    | Posted on 2014-10-25 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol youre suchs softy now
    | Posted on 2014-10-25 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
      Either you're a cannibal or egotist?
    | Posted on 2014-10-21 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Either you're a cannibal or egotist?
    | Posted on 2014-10-21 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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