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Forever&Always


Author: Teofila
ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:    0.4 - 210 /104 /71
Words: 64
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Forever&Always



Forever&Always
Is what we say
And to you
I'm giving my heart away.
Its as fragile as glass
Yes,
Im sorry
It has cracks.
But its yours now
Do with it what you will.
My only fear?
You wont understand how I feel.
So long as your honest
And you continue to love me
I won't leave
So I give to you
Myself entirely...




Submitted on 2014-10-12 14:58:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  simple and relatable poem, i must say. :)
| Posted on 2014-12-12 00:00:00 | by D-Ink | [ Reply to This ]
  
| Posted on 2014-10-25 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
  Lol youre suchs softy now
| Posted on 2014-10-25 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
  Either you're a cannibal or egotist?
| Posted on 2014-10-21 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
  Either you're a cannibal or egotist?
| Posted on 2014-10-21 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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