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    dots Submission Name: Forever In My Souldots
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    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    22/F/Edmonton/AB/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 145/140/109
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 712
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    Description:
       About my first love. Just got in contact with him after 12 years. And I did and still do love him. But I have another man in my life right now. I'm confused and torn.


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    dotsForever In My Souldots
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    I want you to know
    Your apart of my soul
    Forever until I am old

    You broke my mold
    I thought of you when I felt cold
    Within the depths of my black, jet black heart
    There is no more gold

    You saved me from
    Giving up on hope
    I never knew love
    Until I wept so much

    You've always been my saving grace
    I've held on cause I believed in our fate

    I just want you to know,
    I love you more than you'll ever know
    Your rooted upon my soul
    Though we were young, that love will never grow old
    And though our love may not turn out to last
    Though it may not be what you read
    It is imprinted upon me

    My heart will secretly pine
    Forever wanting to be mine
    For all of time
    Know that your there, and i'll always care




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