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Author:	Rainin_Raspbery
ASL Info:	22/F/Edmonton/AB/Canada
Elite Ratio:	3.45 - 145/140/109
Words:	154

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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About my first love. Just got in contact with him after 12 years. And I did and still do love him. But I have another man in my life right now. I'm confused and torn.

Forever In My Soul dots

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I want you to know
Your apart of my soul
Forever until I am old

You broke my mold
I thought of you when I felt cold
Within the depths of my black, jet black heart
There is no more gold

You saved me from
Giving up on hope
I never knew love
Until I wept so much

You've always been my saving grace
I've held on cause I believed in our fate

I just want you to know,
I love you more than you'll ever know
Your rooted upon my soul
Though we were young, that love will never grow old
And though our love may not turn out to last
Though it may not be what you read
It is imprinted upon me

My heart will secretly pine
Forever wanting to be mine
For all of time
Know that your there, and i'll always care

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