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    dots Submission Name: an old modern day proverbdots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
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       i wrote this the summer of 2010.


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    dotsan old modern day proverbdots
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    knowledge is power, or so they say.
    well i have some power to share today.
    no other man would do this for us;
    God sent His Son to die on the cross.

    one dark day, so very long ago,
    forever and ever, the story be told.

    Son of God who was sent to die
    on the rugged ole cross beneath the sky.
    rested forever within the tomb;
    resurrected again to break the gloom.
    our sins and sorrows laid on his back -
    whomever believes this, their soul hell lacks.
    Son of Sorrows sent to save
    the world from their sins;
    to Heaven give Thanks...




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