Under The Radiant Lights

Author: kase ASL Info:    34, M, Winnipeg Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169 /398 /235 Words: 75

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Under The Radiant Lights

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Under the radiant lights Of the moon's reflective shine I sit relaxed without a care With thoughts of you tonight The stars outshine the candles Which remain forever lit Metaphorically symbolizing Exactly what we'd been But the shadow's grace emerges The darkness reflects pain Contributing an emotion Between my anger and the shame Yet somehow I still sit And stare into heaven's eyes Wishing you were here Siitting with me tonight

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Ha reminds me of a recent happening that I told you about. really great write though, I loved it.

| Posted on 2014-10-29 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]

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