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    dots Submission Name: Under The Radiant Lightsdots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsUnder The Radiant Lightsdots
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    Under the radiant lights
    Of the moon's reflective shine
    I sit relaxed without a care
    With thoughts of you tonight

    The stars outshine the candles
    Which remain forever lit
    Metaphorically symbolizing
    Exactly what we'd been

    But the shadow's grace emerges
    The darkness reflects pain
    Contributing an emotion
    Between my anger and the shame

    Yet somehow I still sit
    And stare into heaven's eyes
    Wishing you were here
    Siitting with me tonight




    Submitted on 2014-10-27 09:53:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ha reminds me of a recent happening that I told you about. really great write though, I loved it.
    | Posted on 2014-10-29 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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