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    dots Submission Name: Conspiracydots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 63
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    I feel your presence,
    ubiquitous, to me alone
    provoking me to action
    amid countless aquatic anuran stares
    following my every move

    a debt left uncollected,
    for brethren launched
    to distant arenas
    accused, and now tormented
    by raucous beeps and croaks

    I wait, knowing
    each passing storm
    building greater, your fortress
    of sullen,verdant, velvety skin
    to hide beneath
    to wait




    Submitted on 2014-10-30 18:44:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      can't say i know much about conspiracy, but this surely seems like a spot on description. very astute.
    | Posted on 2014-12-03 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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