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    dots Submission Name: My Lassie odots
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    Author: Frank Maguire
    ASL Info:    57 / UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 1846/1390/288
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMy Lassie odots
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    Come bide a while my lassie o
    On this clear and starry night
    Wile away the hours with me
    Beneath the moon so bright

    Come close to me my lassie o
    Let me see your eyes of blue
    Hold my hand in such a way
    That only you can do

    Come smile the smile my lassie o
    From many years gone by
    Re light the fire in my heart
    So it can touch the sky

    Come tell to me my lassie o
    Your passions dreams and fears
    Give me reason to believe
    You’ve loved me all these years

    Come hold me close my lassie o
    As close as close can be
    Lose yourself just as before
    For all eternity

    Come walk with me my lassie o
    By hills and flowers sweet
    Let us amble endlessly
    And make our lives complete









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    ||| Comments |||
      So love is alive.
    | Posted on 2014-11-02 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Once again you remind me of how deeply I love my women and how badly I miss them of late. To quote myself "I'll walk with you tomorrow along the endless shore while the primal tides are beckoning what has never been before". Apparently we share many similar feelings about our female counterparts. Thanks for the lushly romantic meander. I enjoyed it immensely.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2014-11-02 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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