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Sick Thoughts

Author: childoftears
ASL Info:    20/female/CV Arkansas
Elite Ratio:    1.02 - 3 /24 /39
Words: 116
Class/Type: Poetry /I am dead inside
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In no way am i ever gonna do this so please dnt b alarmed it was just thoughts and poetry so please dnt freak out and call suicide line or nothing.this was a while bck ago and felt like adding some new stuff to my page it is dark but at the time goin thru alot

Sick Thoughts

That silence I was always
afraid of
The tormenting pain and sorrow of losing
the only one you truelly love
The hurtful hard to breath pain feeling your
heart crumble
Its like your whole world burned and crashed
With just one fumble.

No time to feel sad for yourself when you
chose the empty path
Such hatred for life a undescribable
All you want is to turn back time
Yet your stuck in your own sad hell
alone like a mime

Here I stay and here I will lay to deal
with such hatred and pain go insane
and most Likely kill myself!

Submitted on 2014-11-10 15:43:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I agree with Ramneet about the acceptance and strength but I tend to notice the darker side of most things. In this case, the darker side is that point where people say you gave up. Truth be told, everything has a breaking point. Nice piece though.
| Posted on 2014-12-11 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]
  First of all there should be acceptance for the pain and then the strength to deal with it.
| Posted on 2014-12-07 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]

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